OMGG.. I SO LOVE THE DRAWING THAT YOU DID. AMAZING.
OK, I may be good at coming up descriptive stories but I am not so good at using them fancy/intelligent words for them.
Hmmm lets see.....Naruto is close to death because he risked his own life to save Sakura's life.
[link] I think this soundtrack music of "Despair" would go good with my side of the story.
Sakura took a brief look over at Naruto as she gasped. Naruto still hasn't moved after from what happened earlier. Sakura ran over to him as she shouted to him, "Naruto!......NARUTO!" She then stopped at Naruto's side. She dropped to her knees right beside him as she placed her hands on his back and shoulders and shook him gently. "Naruto....," She said trying to see if Naruto could hear her voice. Naruto is still laying there, motionless. Sakura shook him again as she shouted, "Naruto! ...Please wake up!" Naruto still hasn't moved.
Sakura placed her two fingers on the side of Naruto's neck, trying to see if she could feel a heartbeat. The beat of Naruto's heart rate was really faint and slow. The thumping got slower and slower and started to faint even farther away. She took her hand away, a tear ran down Sakura's cheek from her right eye. Sakura noticed that she couldn't sense Naruto's chakra anymore, as though as it was completely gone. "His chakra... it's...," she said while she trying to deny that he is almost dead. Sakura leaned closely over Naruto as she placed her left hand on his left shoulder. "Hang in there.......I will bring you back to the village.....as fast as I can.....Just please....don't die on me!...," she said slowly as her voice became weak. Then she reached out her right hand to place onto Naruto's right hand.
Eventually, the rate of Naruto's heartbeat came to an end and he stopped breathing completely. A few more tears were running down Sakura's cheek as she started to sob, feeling completely devastated. She cries out in agony, "No way.......Please no! .....Naruto...please don't leave me!.....NARUTO!" Sakura lowered her head near the floor, behind Naruto's head as she sobbed.
Sakura layed there while she was still handing onto Naruto's hand and his shoulder. Still sobbing over her best friend, someone who is even more than a best friend to her. "....I love you," Sakura mumbled towards Naruto in a weak tone of voice. She now then couldn't believe that Naruto is gone forever and hope is now all lost.
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All of a sudden, the impossible just happened. Sakura felt Naruto's heart beat again and his chakra level was extremely low. Sakura stopped crying while her eyes widened. Sakura's arm started to move up and down slowly while she had it resting on Naruto as he started breathing again. Sakura stopped crying while she was so shocked that Naruto had magically come back to life it seems. Sakura raised her head up as she gasped and looked at Naruto's face for a few seconds.
Naruto's eyes started to open slowly, with blurred vision, which soon cleared up. Naruto noticed that Sakura was leaning on him, therefore, he had a little trouble breathing at first. ".....Sakura," Naruto weakly spoke. Sakura gasped at the very second that she heard Naruto's voice. As she noticed that Naruto couldn't breath so well from her being on top of him, she stopped leaning on Naruto and sat up straight. "Naruto!" Sakura exclaimed with joy. Sakura felt so relieved that he was alive. There was no way that it could of been possible, but she didn't care. She wiped her tears away with the top of her right hand.
Naruto slid his right arm back so his hand was right across from his other hand. Trying to push himself up by using all the strength, he struggled. Sakura then raised her arms slightly as though she wanted to help Naruto up, but it appeared that he capable of doing it himself. After Naruto got halfway up, he was leaning over forward, with his hands flat on the floor, holding himself up. While he trying to catch his breath, he then coughed up blood onto the floor, which had also ran down his chin.
Naruto was sitting straight up as he looked around. When Naruto took a few deep breaths, he started to feel severe pain in his lungs. As a result, he couldn't breathe. Sakura gasped. While still sitting up, Naruto fell backwards onto the floor as he closed his eyes. Naruto had his hand placed upon his upper chest while he was trying to breathe...but it kept on hurting. Sakura quickly scooted her body in front of Naruto while she was sitting on the ground. "....What is it!? Where does it hurt!??" Sakura quickly asked. ".....lu-lungs.." Naruto strugglingly said in a weak voice as he could barely say anything because he was suffocating.
Sakura took immediate action. She quickly unzipped Naruto's jacket. There was a piece of glass that was stuck through the fishnet shirt Naruto was wearing on the right side of his chest, stabbing into his lungs. The Nine-Tails'(Kurama)'s Chakra healed most of his injuries, but not completely. ....BUT the healing ability from that chakra DID prevent him from dying just in the nick of time.
Sakura forced Naruto to sit up with her arm behind Naruto's back and he still had his eyes closed. Sakura grabbed the piece of glass carefully by using her right hand, and pulled it straight out in a quick motion. "ARGHHH!!" Naruto yelled out in pain. Sakura tossed the blooded-covered piece of glass across the floor. She quickly placed Naruto, had him laying back down on the floor, just like how he was when he was suffocating. She then quickly had both of her hands hovering over Naruto's right lung. A green, luminous glow appeared from her hands that was going into Naruto's lung to heal it up. Naruto had his arms at his sides. Sakura used her advanced healing jutsu to speed up the healing process. Naruto was breathing heavily, which wasn't helping much. Sakura noticed that he wasn't relaxing at all, and then told him, "I need you to relax now. Take slow, deep breaths."
After about five seconds, Naruto had stopped moving as he slowly began to breathe normally again. It took about 3 or 4 minutes to completely heal up the injury in Naruto's right lung. The green, luminous glow started to dissolve and then Sakura returned her hands back as she placed then on her lap.
Naruto was still lying there, resting for a little bit. Naruto opened his eyes again and he sat up again. Naruto looked at Sakura, feeling so grateful for her healing him. He could of died from suffocation if she wasn't there. Naruto slightly smiled, which caused Sakura to look at him in confusion. Naruto then quickly leaned over to her and wrapped his arms around her, hugging her. Sakura gasped, as she didn't move. "Sakura....you are the best! ...You are a life saver! ...Thank you! Thank You Thank you!," Naruto quickly told her in a cheerful tone of voice. Sakura slightly smiled from appreciating Naruto's words.
"And Sakura..." Naruto continued on. Naruto had let go of Sakura as he put his arms down. He had a grin on his face and then he closed his eyes as he spoke, "....I love you too." Sakura gasped. She didn't know that he heard her say that to him earlier.....when she thought he was dead, which was before Kurama's Chakra saved him from death. Naruto giggled.
naruto looks amazing.... sakura as well but it's naruto the one that cought my attention... he looks soo damaged without life and movement... so tired because of everything that he has in his shoulders.... lifelesss... it really makes me wanna cry (it's not just saying actually almost cried)
they went on a mission. Its supposed to be a simple mission were there just going to deliver some supply ,but they were ambushed theses were powerful ninja. One of them took Sakura before Naruto can react. Naruto does a rasengan but before he can use it and mane attacks him brutally injuring Narutos arm. Naruto does a rasengan with a shadow clone freeing sakura from another ninja saving her. The ninja who broke narutos arm threw her into a tree and then started to stomp on her. Naruto then did rasenga once more but barely did any damage to the man so then naruto did shadow clown jutsu. When the battle ended naruto was unconscious Sakura took Naruto to her house and cryed over him.
Hm....this looks like, to me, like something you'd see in a movie or something. Everyone thinks the guy is dead and just when the chick is about to get killed the guy snaps out of it and saves the day. Yeah, that seems about right to me xDD I'm just waiting for that to happen in a Naruto movie >< FAN FICTION DON'T CUT IT DAMMIT!! but anyway, this is lovely
personaly i'm more of a naruhina fan but your artwork amazes me.us great job with this piece. i think naruto is fighting sasuke but sakura doesn't want to lose neither. but naruto is losing right now. NARUTO U BETTER NOT DIE WITH SASUKE.